As I strip and stand contemplatively in the midst of this unending beauty, my senses pause, absorbing the exotic, erotic, beauty of it all. Hugging sister cedar tree I feel her heartbeat bursting with rich, robust life! She is strong and happy! Gazing at her I see her uncompromising strength, her magnificent size speaks to my soul telling me she has stood sentinel here for many, many moons
Diary: It pains me deeply to see my home, my friends from nature, my spirit guides, to be destroyed so callously. I feel their pain and sorrow, and I weep for their plight. How could someone be so cruel. These creatures have stood for so long and have gained so much knowledge that it is a grievous crime to kill them so quickly and without thought. Mother earth suffers as her children kill each other off. She wishes her children to live in harmony, but the white man seems to think himself superior. They need to take the time to feel the aura of life around the gnarled trunk, to hear the beautiful songs that the spirits sing as the wind whistles through the branches. Maybe if they took the chance to understand our ancient brothers and sisters they may not be so apt to kill them off so carelessly.
Reflection: This poem to me encompasses many different aspects of Indian culture. It discusses the unique connection that they share with the earth. The author uses strong language that helps you to understand exactly why such simple aspects of nature, that most people today take for granted, are so coveted in the minds of the Indians. This poem also fills me with disgust towards my white ancestors who fail to take seriously the importants of nature and how fragile it is. I feel ashamed that my ancestors were so careless and destructive when they callously took over North American lands.
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6 comments:
Thank you for the suggestions and the ideas they helped me to improve my blog.
I really liked the language you used in your diary, it was very close to that of the narrators. I also liked how you connected to the poem. I really feel you put alot of your own emotion into your reflection making it very stong in content.
Along with Brittany, I also enjoy your language usage. Your diary piece seems very passionate and you seemed to have a coherent understanding of the passage and its meaning.
Rachel
Very nice - Can you add some mood music? I would like to see you answer your essential question for this section - With respect to your EQ - I suggest a revision which goes something like this: How does the American Dream continue to survive in a society which is corrupted by carlessness, ...
Grade: 96
Ms. Mic
Oh - I forgot - Can you respond to Brit and Kyle - so that the dialogue becomes progressive?
Thanks
Ms. Mic
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